More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is said that more individuals decided to have children in their later age than in the past. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each person or each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, in the later age aldut will have enough confident, value information and advantage knowledge to taught for their teenagers. Not only can they give the lagre worry from bottom of their heart for the little kids, but also adolescence can transmited interesting experience by their parent which aldut have learnt in their life. Furthermore, some people decided to have children when their career have successful and numerous achivement. The citizen can bring sufficiency life, afforable significant equipment and habit for their children, and also teenagers will gave the best education to develop themselves to contribute their ability for the development of the nation. To illustrate, at the great and appropriate course the youngs generation can show all of their talent, being important for their country in the future.
On the other hand, the women at later age will very difficul to reproduction, it will reduce significantly the number of individuals. The nation will lose A plenty of youngs generation in many fields and occupation. Moreover, it is hugely dangerous to the health of female. Not only does it risk to the digestive, intestines and uteries, but also majority who was borned by woment in later age will not strong and genius as nomal one.
To conclude, by my agrument from this essay that statement have its own advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each situation, so parent need to have bright plan to improve their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73275213083 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7738280123 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325474825784 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122687986915 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134450486833 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196291713792 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933990787486 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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