The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart delineates the data for universal sale of Coca-Cola in the year 2000, while the graph illustrates the variation of share price during 6-year period, from 1996 to 2001.
In 2000, Coca-Cola had a dramatical outcome with over 17 billion cases of their beverage product consumed. Significantly, the consumption of North America occupied the highest proportion of total avenue, over 30.4%. Besides that, the ratio of Latin America had the second largest, nearly 26%. While, Asian and European had fairly similar purchases, respectively 16,4% and 20,5%. And final but not the least, Africa and Middle East had a pretty small percentage compared to the rest
In the year of 1996, Coca-Cola share prices were valued at nearly 40$, the lowest price during the 6-year period. Since then, there has been a tendency to increase dramatically and hit a peak in the middle of 1998, approximately 70$ , before fluctuating and then decreasing significantly from 1998 to 2000, under 50$. The last period continued to decrease slightly after rocketing in a short phase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$40'.
Suggestion: $40
...Cola share prices were valued at nearly 40$, the lowest price during the 6-year per...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$70'.
Suggestion: $70
...ak in the middle of 1998, approximately 70$ , before fluctuating and then decreasin...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in the middle of 1998, approximately 70$ , before fluctuating and then decreasing ...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
... significantly from 1998 to 2000, under 50$. The last period continued to decrease ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19540229885 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69065806381 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8211429478 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122799896515 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439708355614 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664956971449 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966185509031 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705948529007 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.