The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
The chart delineates the data for the plenty of spare time being enjoyed by men and women according to a variety of job situations between 1998 and 1999.
In terms of both unemployed and retired types, there is a similar scenario for the number of spare time used by males and females that not only did men have greater leisure time, over eighty hours, than women,over seventy hours, but also definitely being the highest hours of leisure time compared to other categories.
In contrast, regarding employed full-time, the group being the least time in all of the types is that men had an average of fifty hours of leisure time, although women had about thirty-seven hours. Significantly, there were not any statistics for spare time enjoyed by male being in part-time employees as well as househusband, while female part-time workers got forty hours of free time and housewives had around fifty-four hours of unscheduled time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...sure time, over eighty hours, than women,over seventy hours, but also definitely bein...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...time, the group being the least time in all of the types is that men had an average of fif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0064516129 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64067282443 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8278861033 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.0 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.75 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.23603664747 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182330658196 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125046953121 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189790634011 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136941633754 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143323759908 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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