Fewer topics are more important than choosing the suitable path for higher education for students, and the issue of whether young people should continue their studies at the university or follow their instinct to enroll in vocational workshops will probably always be a topic of controversy. In my opinion, I completely agree that students who do vocational training instead of academic studies should be encouraged because of the numerous benefits it awards them.
Firstly, there has been a craving need for employees with skilled training in large corporations in the last few recent years. With the abundance of employees who only know about their field through books and statistics, hiring managers nowadays are looking for candidates who have completed previous training in related fields. Although the procedure done by a vocational student is not as standardized as a normal college graduate, he can quickly adapt to the working environment and apply technological breakthroughs to make up the gap. Thus, vocational trainers have a remarkable advantage compared to freshers.
Another reason to encourage young people to take part in job training is that this can be an opportunity for them to achieve high-salary work. This is because there has been a lack of blue-collar workers in the labor market in recent years. Especially in developing countries, more and more workers are needed in infrastructure projects, constructing facilities such as bridges and roads. The construction requires numerous workers who have been pre-trained without the need for deep knowledge in the field. Thus, students who have already taken part in vocational training are likely to be considered for the position instead of students who only know about theory.
In conclusion, academic study has been a traditional career path for students for many decades. However, with the always-changing society like today, the young generation should be encouraged to take an alternative road, which is vocational training.
- Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspapers have bad consequences This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in media To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 73
- Governments should support care vs finance for retired people While they should save money when they get older Discuss both views and give opinions 67
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 84
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel and work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43269230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97710520601 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2465158611 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.384615385 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322207963425 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106897367642 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681764513902 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197378540274 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893724123361 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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