The birth-rate in our city is declining: in fact, last year's birth-rate was only one-half that of five years ago. Thus the number of students enrolled in our public schools will soon decrease dramatically, and we can safely reduce the funds budgeted for education during the next decade. At the same time, we can reduce funding for athletic playing fields and other recreational facilities. As a result, we will have sufficient money to fund city facilities and programs used primarily by adults, since we can expect the adult population of the city to increase.
As per the recommendation made by the committee planning, the city will have sufficient money to fund city facilities and programs used primarily by adults. Since the birthrate in the city is plunging, the number of students enrolled in public schools will be much lower and the funds that need to be budgeted for education, athletic playing fields, and other recreational facilities during the next decade can be deducted. The recommendation can appear true only if the argument is properly evaluated and the three question below is successfully tackled with critical reasoning.
Does birthrate ever remain in its declining state? The birthrate of a particular city depends upon various factors. The birthrate may be declining due to a lack of proper hospital facilities, a lack of nourishment diet for pregnant women, a lack of care, etc. If a proper hospital is planned and a burgeon diet is available, then the birthrate may increase. So birth rate may not necessarily decline in the next decade if deficiency is replenished carefully taking into account different factors. The fluctuations in the birth rate depend on how the budget will be proportionately allocated for the health sector. The statement that the birth rate will decline over the decades means that the budget is not allocated with emphasis on health facilities rather it is more inclined to other non-critical activities.
Does an Adult population necessarily increase in the city? The adult who is mature enough to handle himself may not remain in the same city. Some might leave Calatrava for employment, while others may travel abroad for educational purposes. The adult who is native to Calatrava may not all remain in the same city. So this assumption holds true only if all the adults are restricted to migrate from their place.
Is facilities and activities for adults more important than the facilities and activities for a child? Though the birth rate has declined markedly, there may be few children in the next decades too. Children are a critical part of society and deducting the children's facilities and programs may result in demoralization in parents regarding the birth of new children. Thus, it will further reduce the population of people in consecutive next decades and is very pernicious to the future. So the facilities and programs for children must be emphasized rather than adding services and facilities for adults. If the city wants to get emptied in the future, then the following assumption can be made.
The recommendation made by the committee planning, as it stands now, is utterly flawed. For this recommendation to hold true, answers must be given to the above three questions considering the argument carefully. If the above question can be pellucidly tackled with proper reasoning the recommendation can be made.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tc. If a proper hospital is planned and a burgeon diet is available, then the birthrate m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 670, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...at the birth rate will decline over the decades means that the budget is not allocated ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ons considering the argument carefully. If the above question can be pellucidly ta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 459.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15904139434 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93664138378 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 705.55239521 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1078660275 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70833333333 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192270884184 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547094145023 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491858865934 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102538075039 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560817433983 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tc. If a proper hospital is planned and a burgeon diet is available, then the birthrate m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 670, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...at the birth rate will decline over the decades means that the budget is not allocated ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ons considering the argument carefully. If the above question can be pellucidly ta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 459.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15904139434 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93664138378 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 705.55239521 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1078660275 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70833333333 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192270884184 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547094145023 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491858865934 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102538075039 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560817433983 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.