Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living overseas is a chance for self development. however, I agree with belief that said serious social problems may arise if someone lives in a country where they speak a foreign language for two main reasons.
Firstly, language barrier is a factor, which leads to miscommunication. Although it could be argued that living abroad can broaden our knowledge, not all of us have the capability to learn a foreign language. To illustrates, despite resources for studying language are distributed all over the internet and we study so hard, each people have different language intelligence. Not only local citizens will find difficulty to communicate with foreigners, it can also cause misunderstanding, which may develop into serious social conflicts. It is, therefore, clear how this obstacle would hamper the development of healthy relationship.
Secondly, cultural shock can be experienced by foreigners because of different culture . This is mainly because most of people all over the world have different in ethics although we have a fluent foreign language skill. Take an example that some people disagree with a culture that allows young people call elderly without using title such as mister and miss and the opposite. Thus, living in a country where we cannot speak our mother tongue will lead us to deal with code of ethics, which, in turn, cause a lot of practical problems in society.
In conclusion, living overseas has many social and practical challenges not only because of language barrier, but also the difference in culture and ethics. I, therefore, remain firmly convinced that our home country is the best place for us to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ferent culture . This is mainly because most of people all over the world have different in et...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21804511278 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8591820154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3398182733 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312634470952 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998731804571 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789539449621 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19399511977 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609127751321 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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