These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages of studying in a foreign country
Write at least 250 words
In recent years, there has been a growing concern about whether students should or should not study in a foreign country. However, everything has its own merits and demerits. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of why students choose to study abroad.
At the outset, it is crucial to recognise that there are plenty of merits of studying abroad. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it provides a unique opportunity to immerse oneself in a new culture. This allows them to have a better understanding of other cultures, and develop cross-culture which are highly developed by employers in today’s globalized world. Another advantage is that studying in a foreign country where the language is different from one’s native language can help improve language skills. By talking with native speakers, students are able to be provided a great opportunity to completely immerse themselves in a new language. There are plenty of ways to learn a language, but it’s often said that the best way to learn a language is to surround yourself with it
On the other hand, it is essential to acknowledge the opposing viewpoints. One of the biggest drawbacks of studying abroad is financial burden. Studying in a foreign country means that students have to spend a great deal of money on flight tickets, renting accommodation, tuition, and so on. This can result in a huge financial burden not just on themselves but also on their families too, as students have to work to earn more money and pay for living expenses instead of focusing on their studies. Another definite disadvantage of studying abroad is homesickness. it's difficult to live in a country that is completely foreign and from where you used to live, it takes time to get used to it and start a new life here. You are alone and no one is by your side and more and more difficulties and challenges you have to encounter. This might cause feelings of frustration, loneliness and homesickness
In summary, studying overseas, with its pros and cons, can have a double-edged effect on our lives. From my standpoint, I believe that experience gained from studying in other countries is desirable for international students and they’re also gaining proficiency in another language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...age of studying abroad is homesickness. its difficult to live in a country that is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90684286636 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526455026455 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8734584522 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.588235294 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195406607584 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590584930879 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418561393827 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112645131646 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494360022011 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.