While many believe that in order to be successful in sports, physical endurance is essential, others argue that mental toughness is more necessary. This essay will discuss both views and justify my support for the former opinion.
On the one hand, many people affirm that mentally strong health is crucial to achieve high-level goals in sports. It is undoubted that the sport industry is a competitive field where every sportsperson is inclined to accomplish high ranks in any championship. Therefore, every sports player has to foster a competitive spirit and even a win-at-all-cost attitude regardless of physical and mental hindrances. If athletes cannot maintain a patient and calm attitude during their competition, they will unlikely be able to perform accurately and acceptably, thus leading to mistakes. These failures can accumulate gradually, and cause sportspeople to be discouraged and unmotivated, which can indeed lead to their resignation in the future.
On the other hand, I firmly assert that maintaining healthy physical strength and endurance is the rudiment of any sport. It is undeniable that numerous sports, such as football volleyball, and swimming, require their players to sustain physical toughness under tremendous pressure within a prolonged duration. Therefore, sportspeople need to have a physically healthy body to perform such energy-consuming activities. By way of illustration, a standard football match usually last for 90 minutes and demands a great amount of energy and stamina from players. As a result, football players are required to have a high level of physical endurance and flexibility, as well as several physical skills to maintain sufficient energy for their bodies to function well. This can explain why there were previously some contestants who used illegal enduring-enhancing substances, such as ephedrine, before their competitions.
In conclusion, despite the importance of maintaining healthy mental strength during competitions, I assert that physical endurance is indispensable to success in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70226537217 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23324780215 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3418446249 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209356325808 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692552405154 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637007607954 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145804531224 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667423190463 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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