The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
A society's young generation is it's heart. The quality of the future of any country or any society, is directly proportional to how erudite the young generation is and how much can they empathize with the people around them. The prompt suggests the best way to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, and not competition. I highly agree with this suggestion. The arguments, for the prompt will be discussed in detail in the coming sections.
First of all, the mark of any great leader, is how much they know about the people they are leading and to what extent can they sympathize with the sorrows and happiness of their followers. This is the case for leaders in every sector, including but not limited to government, industry or amy other fields. If a leader is not aware of the present condition of their followers, how will he lead them? Such a virtue can only be reached through cooperation not competition. For example: the political leaders of the Indian subcontinent are subsumed by corruption as they compete with other leaders in a vicious race to accumulate wealth. Their motives are driven by a competition for wealth and not by an innate desire to help the people of the country. Such a problem, can only be solved through appropriate cooperation with the common people of the country to get a better understanding of what is necessary to root out the issues. Consequently, highlighting the point of rasing our young generation who prioritize cooperation more than competition.
Second of all, we must keep in mind that, a leader is the leader for everyone. Thus, to lead everyone he or she must be aware of the virtues or vices of everyone as well. For example: let us consider the leader of a team working towards building a software for a client. His team consists of several people each with their unique skillset. Lack of cooperation between the leader and his subordinates will lead to a complete disaster of the software development. The leader will not be able to partition the tasks appropriately, keeping in mind the skillsets of his employees. Consquently, his subordinates will begin to despise him and this will lead to the eventual collapse of the development. As a result, we can observe that if a leader had the skill of cooperation instilled in him, the disaster could have been precluded. Thus, further empasizing the statement in the prompt that future leaders should be brought up instilling a sense of cooperation in them and not competition.
On the contrary, it can be argued that without proper competition the necessary technical skills required to survive in such a cruel society like ours, will never be developed. But no virtue is more important for a leader, than the virtue of knowing the people he or she is leading. So we can conclude by saying that if a future leader has to sacrifice a certain degree of expertise of a technical skill, it is worthwhile in the grand scheme of churning out apt leaders for the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...is and how much can they empathize with the people around them. The prompt suggests the best way to pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83047619048 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86375362195 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8976949312 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.44 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289455630917 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850939556457 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111168757569 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196002582776 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119876490368 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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