The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Units of electricity production by fuel source Australia and France in 1980 and 2000 are displayed by a chart.
In the first chart in 1980, it is obvious that natural gas and coal have the largest percentage by nearly a quarter for both of them. Oil comes in the second stage by nearly a third. Hydro power and nuclear power have the minimum percentages by 5% and 15% respectively.
In 2000, Australia and France started to depend on nuclear power majorily. Percentages of nuclear power jumped up to 126%. While they kept the percentage of coal constant by nearly a quarter. Moreover, percentage of using oil jumped a little to become nearly a quarter. However, the usage of natural gas and hydro power minimized to become 2% the least percentage in the chart.
Overall, it seems that Australia and France started to use nuclear energy in 2000 more than in 1980. However, they reduced the usage natural gas and hydro power. They also increased the percentage of usage of oil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ges of nuclear power jumped up to 126%. While they kept the percentage of coal consta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63236663377 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5986803417 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337634610139 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132093906597 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201651613152 0.0843802449381 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277245223208 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232077749791 0.0819641961636 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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