In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to
Nowadays some sportsmen use doping to improve their performance during the game. That has a devastating impact on their health and lives so this essay will show how this doping has a side effect on their bodies and how to address this problem.
The consequences of doping for athletes can be significant. First of all, Health Risks:
Many performance-enhancing drugs, such as steroids, can have serious side effects,
including liver damage, cardiovascular problems, and hormonal imbalances. Second,
Sanctions and Penalties: Athletes caught doping can face severe sanctions,
including prevent them from competition, stripping of medals and titles, and in some
cases, lifetime bans. These sanctions can have a devastating impact on an athlete's
career and reputation. Third, Unfair Advantage: Doping provides athletes with an
unfair advantage over their competitors, undermining the integrity and fairness of the
sport. This can lead to a distortion of the competition and undermine public trust in
the sport.
To combat the issue of doping in sports, several measures should be taken: first,
Strengthening Anti-Doping Regulations and Enforcement: Governing bodies of
sports should implement robust anti-doping policies, including regular testing,
increased penalties for offenders, and the use of advanced detection methods.
Second, Educational Campaigns: Comprehensive educational programs should be
developed to inform athletes, coaches, and the general public about the dangers of
doping and the importance of fair and ethical competition. Third, Collaborative
Efforts: International cooperation and coordination between sports governing bodies,
anti-doping agencies, and law enforcement agencies are essential to combat the
global nature of the doping problem.
In conclusion, using doping among athletes has many negative effects on society.
The necessary actions are required to control it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10256410256 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1741485539 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1443058986 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250441433246 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898710836964 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772682522337 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644232272142 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576285847821 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.1 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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