Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is, nowadays, believed, by some that we are faced with wide choices. I strongly agree that at present we have too many options to choose from.
Competition is one of the key characteristics of the present world and competition gives rise to more and more options. For example- a few decades back we only had four or five types of packed food to choose from, now we can find a whole section devoted to such in supermarkets. It is not only food but also clothes, jewelry, etc. that offers wide choices.
Besides, new technology and innovation foster new products and hence new options. For instance- I grew up watching my mother wear a simple analog watch, while now digital, smart, skeletal, and many different watches are available in the market. Another such example is that all the houses in my country had wooden doors and windows, however now I have observed doors and windows made from aluminum, steel, iron, glass, etc.
Conclusively, the technological development and competition of the present world have given birth to new products and stems and cop can have oceans of options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...while now digital, smart, skeletal, and many different watches are available in the market. An...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88770053476 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68532275105 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4763052287 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123827801295 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511650487093 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691020890416 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944750256135 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945724432555 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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