Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Guided by the protocols and procedures of the government, it is the duty of the government officials to work for the people and solve their problems. In most cases, there is always a finite procedure for working and it does not provide much freedom to either use own judgement or listen to people’s will. However, the life of people and the situation prevalent is ever chancing and almost every government official will encounter the situation beyond the jurisdiction of the rule book. While the government officials who have worked for the people and served them are always well cherished by the public it is not necessary that demands of the public might always be incoherent with the procedure and protocols developed by the nation according to which the officials are required to function. Hence, I personally believe, government officials should neither rely unquestioningly in their judgement nor should they blindly follow people rather weigh down the judiciousness of both and take decision.
The government officials are the bridge between the needs of people and provision of the government. It is the duty of a government to provide service allocated by the government to the people, however a responsible government should also communicate the need of the people. For e.g. the unmarried parents of Nepal are not recognized by the law of Nepal and the government officials turn them down and deny the children’s birth certificate and it is not under the jurisdiction of the officials to either go through the will of people or provide them certificate on their own, however a responsible government official must be able to communicate such cases to the government in order to incorporate in the law. In lack of such effectiveness, those children still suffer in Nepal growing up to fight for the citizenship and identity.
The government officials, sometime need to address the situation of emergency and calamities and in such instance they might be required to take strict actions going beyond the will of the people. For instance, during COVID-19, many nations underwent lockdown and were forced to keep people isolated but many people were censuring the government and alleging them of the deprivation of basic human rights. The another example in support of the above mentioned statement could be the recent action taken by Balen Shah, the Mayor of Kathmandu, Nepal for removing the street vendors and illegal construction of Kathmandu Metropolitan. The mayor Shah had to face severe criticism for depriving the poor street vendors and causing loss to the hard-earned property of public, nonetheless, every citizen, now, praise him for his audacious action that led to the clean city and decrease in traffic which has facilitated easy passage for pedestrian as well as 15minute faster service of the ambulance.
In spite of that if the government officials persistently work against the will of the people, the people might be indignant and this might even lead to dreadful consequences. Recently, two important events have occurred in my country that can justify the assertion. First, the denial of the citizenship-by-decent to the people who are born through Nepali mother and foreign father was time and again chastised by the people and brought to government, yet the delayed in action and continuous rejection by president forced the citizenshipless people to take their case to the street. Next, is the case of a citizen who had time and again tried various attempt to get to the government official for ease of business in Nepal, the convoluted market structure had brought him to the state of bankruptcy, committed suicide by burning himself alive in front of parliament to draw the attention of government to his demands.
Summing up, the government officials have a protocol to follow to carry out their duty, however it is people who make the system not the system that makes the people so a government official should judiciously weigh down all the consequences before functioning and should be efficient enough to take the problem, if any, to the government and concerned authority to solve the issues of the public. The judicious and harmonious relationship between the government officials, government and people is necessary to establish peace and progress a nation.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little 75
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future 66
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 66
- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, well, while, for instance, as well as, in most cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 42.0 12.9106741573 325% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3610.0 2235.4752809 161% => OK
No of words: 700.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15714285714 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14368672361 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9373735318 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 323.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461428571429 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1118.7 704.065955056 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7175234727 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.0 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8421052632 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349935841615 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111375187359 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841716667636 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202131549346 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093406292142 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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