We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/ or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
As famously said by one of the pioneer of modern architecture, Walter Gropius “Limitation makes a creative mind inventive”, the struggle within the limitation acts as a catalyst in propelling one’s path towards discipline and success and teaches us lessons every day, whereas success, as an accomplished state has not much lessons to offer rather to offer a fruit of one’s past activities. Hence, in my opinion, it is the struggle that teaches us most valuable lessons than the enjoyment of our success.
Limitations has the tendency to create boundary while it is our human nature to be want to be free hence the struggle within the boundary is always for the betterment of ourselves. while struggling within ur boundaries we always seek to better ourselves. For e.g. if a person wants to be in the top position of the management, he will thrive to engulf the qualities essential to the position and is always willing to learn new things, however a person already in top management will be self-assured and involve themselves in enjoyment of success achieved rather than toil in the path. Some might argue that the person in top management already have feature desired by those aiming for that position but talent is never complete there is always a chance for improvement but success obscure this view.
Struggle is the path while success is the destination The path offers us hurdles, demands us dedication, makes us cautious of the dangers while once in destination we get to see the picturesque view and feel idyllic calm but has not much to teach. for instance, let us consider the Mt. Everest climbers. The climbers rarely describe the view they observed from the peak of the world but everyone has a different lesson to teach us from what they encountered in the way up the mountain. It is the pain they encounter in the path, the obscuration by the snow storm, the struggle of survival with the limited oxygen supply that makes there journey a lifetime achievement not the view they see from the top. One might argue that the struggle they face does not make them the star but the achievement they receive by being on the top. Of course, it is with no doubt that people only remembers those who reach the top but how they felt when they were on the top is rarely prioritized over what they had to go through on the journey while ascending and descending.
There might be some who argue that the way we enjoy success also teaches us very great lessons. There is a saying in my culture which roughly translates in English to “Don’t be arrogant if you triumph and don’t panic while you lose.” However, the success only gives us the way it works but struggle in the limitations awards us with many ways it does not and as said by the Thomas Alva Edison, “I didn’t fail 1000times, I learnt 999 ways that doesn’t work.”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ccess, as an accomplished state has not much lessons to offer rather to offer a frui...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o offer rather to offer a fruit of one’s past activities. Hence, in my opinion, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...always for the betterment of ourselves. while struggling within ur boundaries we alwa...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...always for the betterment of ourselves. while struggling within ur boundaries we alwa...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'featured'.
Suggestion: featured
...e person in top management already have feature desired by those aiming for that positi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...idyllic calm but has not much to teach. for instance, let us consider the Mt. Evere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., hence, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, no doubt, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7384305835 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61618630257 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490945674044 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.424394093 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.214285714 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 23.4991977007 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190420229982 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703662780307 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636840911876 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116003198153 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394267793406 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.