Claim People who say they are bored should look inward rather than blaming the circumstances in which they find themselves Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you a

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as feeling 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ospital, if bored is defined as feeling like have nothing interesting to do. For ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... For students, they should rather feel everyday is rather occupide rather than every mi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...us other ineresting things to focus on. Therefore it can be tenable to purport that stude...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...n have two weekends for their punchent. Therefore their life should be really occupied ev...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...re their life should be really occupied everyday. The people with dissents may argue ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...lways choose to work in any industry he prefer, unless he did not want to while suffer...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... able to work outside of this hospitle. Therefore the environment is the main reason for ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
.... In conclusion, as technologies has facilitate human life as it was not ever was, it w...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84741784038 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47903884246 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504694835681 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.294335428 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139181849515 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585904779384 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357768998592 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732967950614 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269911958864 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.