Claim: People who say they are bored should look inward rather than blaming the circumstances in which they find themselves.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The proposal claimed that one should balme on themselves, due to wanting imagination or selfmotivation, for camplaining their insipid life entirely bored. I agree on such assertion for people, regard of their age, except those without any mobility, like those who heavily sick in the hospital, if bored is defined as feeling like have nothing interesting to do.
For students, they should rather feel everyday is rather occupide rather than every minite is idle. In schools, they have many course work to do if they have strong desir for entering a top university and have a promising career in the further. They have many friends to hang out with even after the class, or they could play varied of vedio games, wtach Tiktoks, and numorous other ineresting things to focus on. Therefore it can be tenable to purport that students ought to have exciting daily life, otherwise that could attriute themslves for not finding anything interesting.
It should be even be more hard to exculpate for those who is already work for feeling bored, as they are more independent from their parents have more autonomy on their own life. During weekdays, they should be engrossed in their work for further promotion, while they could only then have two weekends for their punchent. Therefore their life should be really occupied everyday.
The people with dissents may argue that what if one would complain that people could still grumble about their boring life if they do not like their work. In this case, the most trenchent rebuttle is that people are always with mobility, if one do not like the work in finance, he could always choose to work in any industry he prefer, unless he did not want to while suffered from such tame life, Then in this case, the only one responsible for his current boring life is himself.
However, there can be on senario that one is not culpable for his boring life, which is that he is experiencing accidents or illness which made him unable to choose his life. Under the circumstance that one patient can only stay at the hospital and sustains his life with those complex machine, it would be normal for him to grumble about his boring life for not being able to work outside of this hospitle. Therefore the environment is the main reason for the humdrum or even miserable life.
In conclusion, as technologies has facilitate human life as it was not ever was, it would be the man's responsibility for finding himself a fanscinating life under most case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as feeling 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ospital, if bored is defined as feeling like have nothing interesting to do. For ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... For students, they should rather feel everyday is rather occupide rather than every mi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...us other ineresting things to focus on. Therefore it can be tenable to purport that stude...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...n have two weekends for their punchent. Therefore their life should be really occupied ev...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...re their life should be really occupied everyday. The people with dissents may argue ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...lways choose to work in any industry he prefer, unless he did not want to while suffer...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... able to work outside of this hospitle. Therefore the environment is the main reason for ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
.... In conclusion, as technologies has facilitate human life as it was not ever was, it w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84741784038 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47903884246 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504694835681 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.294335428 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139181849515 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585904779384 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357768998592 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732967950614 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269911958864 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.