In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology and other types of imaginative literature
Career play's important role in every teenager's life to decide their future scope based on condition laid on the ground by the latest technology, innovation in field and other aspects. Graduating from a specific field of science which eventually narrow the path to success rather than focusing on other career tracks which may or may not be useful in long run of career. Career choosing is the decision that a teenager should take with extremely cautiously by taking multiple factors in to consideration and important in those factors is interest which need to be addressed. If, an individual tries to achieve a carer path in more than one track then it will make situation esoteric and the teenager will perplexed to focus.
First is the example of Linus Torvalds, the person who created the extraordinary Linux Operating System (OS) and Git. These two contributions helped revolutionising industry by accepting newer standards set by open source community. His Git solution is used by almost every person who is somehow related to programming field. If, he would have mastered poetry or mythology or any other career track then we would be using the obsolete track. He choose something which he loved and inspired other to choose favourite career track and contribute in order to make world more better place.
Second is the example of politician Barack Obama, who served as first black President of United States of America. His term is seen as golden due his implementation of policies which helped America flourish in each and every aspect. His term experienced lowest rate of unemployment in America's 400+ years of independence. His policy to execute terrorist lord Bin Laden is seen as act of patriotism which revenged the 9/11 attack.
Third is the example of Mukesh Ambani, who is the chairman of Reliance Group. He is also recognised as Asia's richest person, who has more than 100 thousand employee. He from early age was motivated to become successor of his father's business. He pursued M.B.A so that he can contribute to business in best possible way which will keep flourishing under his guidance and will expand up to maximum.
I do not agree with the statement in order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology and other types of imaginative literature. It is always better to have a narrower path to achieve success in interested area which will not only encourage to contribute more but also to make field better than what it is today. All the example's stated above, have choose their favourite field as their career. So, it is necessary for each and every parent to allow their child to pursue career in interested area.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- Claim Major Policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts Reason Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better and perspective than do members of general public 66
- Claim Any piece of information referred to as a fact mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future Reason Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate 66
- Educational institutions should encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers 58
- Government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
Career plays important role in every teenagers life to decide their future scope based...
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Line 1, column 705, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'perplex'
Suggestion: perplex
...ituation esoteric and the teenager will perplexed to focus. First is the example of Linu...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to revolutionise' or 'revolutionise'.
Suggestion: to revolutionise; revolutionise
...and Git. These two contributions helped revolutionising industry by accepting newer standards s...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had mastered'?
Suggestion: had mastered
...ow related to programming field. If, he would have mastered poetry or mythology or any other career...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...e would be using the obsolete track. He choose something which he loved and inspired o...
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...k and contribute in order to make world more better place. Second is the example of politi...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'experienced the lowest'.
Suggestion: experienced the lowest
...rish in each and every aspect. His term experienced lowest rate of unemployment in Americas 400+ y...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in Americas 400+ years of independence. His policy to execute terrorist lord Bin La...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Asias the richest'.
Suggestion: Asias the richest
...eliance Group. He is also recognised as Asias richest person, who has more than 100 thousand ...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...come successor of his fathers business. He pursued M.B.A so that he can contribute...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...of his fathers business. He pursued M.B.A so that he can contribute to business i...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...A so that he can contribute to business in best possible way which will keep flourishin...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ay. All the examples stated above, have choose their favourite field as their career. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97379912664 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69040290061 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561135371179 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.117673718 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.476190476 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8095238095 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218261507287 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572212037837 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130621390182 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111719886918 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107816796015 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.