Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write an essay about 250 words.
Children today are undoubtedly more exposed to computers and electronic entertainment than ever before. However, it is said to be better for children to be outside playing sports and engaging in traditional pastimes rather than spending all day indoors. In my opinion, I agree with this statement.
First and foremost, physical activity is crucial for a child's overall development. Playing sports not only promotes physical fitness but also teaches valuable life skills such as teamwork, discipline, and perseverance. It encourages children to be active participants rather than passive observers, fostering a sense of independence and self-confidence. By engaging in outdoor activities, children can improve their motor skills and develop a healthy lifestyle from an early age.
Moreover, traditional pastimes provide children with opportunities for social interaction and face-to-face communication. Spending time outdoors enables them to make new friends, learn how to cooperate with others, and develop essential social skills that cannot be acquired through virtual interactions alone. These interpersonal connections contribute to their emotional well-being and help them establish meaningful relationships beyond the confines of a screen.
Last but not least, being immersed in nature has numerous cognitive benefits for children. Studies have shown that exposure to natural environments enhances creativity, problem-solving abilities, and concentration levels. Outdoor play stimulates curiosity and exploration as children interact with the natural world around them. It allows them to appreciate the beauty of nature firsthand while nurturing their imagination.
In conclusion, while computers and electronic entertainment have their merits in terms of education and connectivity, it is crucial for children to strike a balance between indoor technology use and outdoor activities. Therefore, I firmly believe that it is indeed better for children to spend time outside playing sports rather than being solely dependent on computers all day long.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03401360544 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19538227144 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3075356321 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420872092198 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127015424591 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113991052394 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246120237521 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169740878472 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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