Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtedly that expressing honesty is a contributory factor to create a relationship with someone else. I, personally, state the same perspective of this issue which I elaborate more below.
On the one side, being truthful becomes an individual to have self-confidence in a relationship, sadly, it might sometime harm closest people, particularly oldsters. It appears when truth, some serious accidents happening to ones, delivered to elderlies would experience overwhelming shocked, and thus ending up heart attack due to vulnerable physical condition. Furthermore, mostly people would feel intimidated or offended to their accomplishment having their telling. As opposed to accept supportive responses, others spread the malicious rumours about him deliberately. Thus, those who always disclose honesty can be heavy depression.
On the flip side, it is the concrete view that human being is social creatures, in which they need other people to communicate with them. This would create not only self-confidence individual but also close-knit family members. To illustrate, if one of family members undergo a serious problem in ones’ marital life, others can wisely give the worth solutions. In addition, one of effective preventions preclude perpetrators to commit further crime with telling on social media. Cited by AIFS, Australian Governments provide access telling the truth in order that citizens want to disclose their bad experience to faster their recovery with getting shelters and reassuring their story.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, creating a relationship by disclosing the truthfulness are more beneficial to develop social interaction with others. This includes maintaining human interaction as well as combating the violence. This is as long as there is no great effect delivered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'harm the closest'.
Suggestion: harm the closest
... relationship, sadly, it might sometime harm closest people, particularly oldsters. It appea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71955719557 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17126417006 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682656826568 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6834064606 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987435587149 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289640480685 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266524317906 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546861496506 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224255233335 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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