Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people argue that intelligence can be gain with effort, others feel that talent it should be inherited by genetic. This citation reaches argument on both sides, which we will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, debaters of intelligence are innate state that people with high IQ have a fixed mindset and over-confidence. For example, this intellect individual may think that their intellectual abilities are set in stone which, potentially will discouraging efforts to improve or learn. Furthermore, this nature intelligence perspective tends to downplay the impact of environmental factor. However, it’s also important to recognize that individuals have different starting points due to genetic variations. Albert Einstein is the most famous scientists who spent full of life to look into the fi
On the other hand, proponents of this vies say that improvable intelligence promotes a growth mindset. For instance, many people who became great success in their life in spite of getting poor grades in school and the one of that is Thomas Edison, one of the most successful investors in human history. This nurture way can encourage people to invest in education and personal development. This in technology development era, big company needs a talented employee with excellent ability for instance, both camp for job training is the popular way to enhance employee ability due to mastering one skill need effort and learn.
Overall, it seems to me that not only by innate but also intelligence can be gain through learning. Those include enacting of a growth mindset and encourage people to invest in education. This is as long as as individuals enhance their growth mindset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32103321033 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99091091928 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7029043238 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215490813635 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072399562886 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546360042968 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133638063178 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274846188331 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.