Claim: It is no longer possible for society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Society is the important part of democracy, a part of society recognises a person as hero only after rigorous, profound analysis while other just due to their peculiar habit society regard as hero. To recognise oneself as hero, society check's the person on various scale's like behaviour, friendliness, plausibility, credibility and many more. Indeed, thoroughly analysis like background or past history check can't be performed due to some limitation's in ability to grab information while in this part media play's a crucial role. Media glean and broadcasts it on their network for people's good.
First is the example of A Raja, Member of Parliament of India, who is accused of one of the largest scam in Indian Market. Society was unaware of the scam until media scrutinised the person rigorously, and garnered evidences against him and put forward of society. After receiving heavy criticism from society, Government of India setup a committee which will validate the evidence against the Member of Parliament. The criticism was too heavy that he gave resignation from the post of Minister, in order to lower it but till date no proof's are validated but society is now speculative against A Raja on this topic for his crime.
Second is the example of Suresh Kalmadi, Member of Parliament of India and ex-Minister of Sports, who is master mind of scam named as "Commonwealth Scam". Media again garnered substantial evidences against the person on the scam and presented to society, in order to prove the crime performed by Mr. Kalmadi. The supreme court announced imprisonment after going thorough judicial procedure against the accused, it occurred just because of media.
Third is the example of one of the greatest Actor Govinda, who is accused of getting involved in scam of fooling people to invest their money into paradigm lucrative scheme. The media put forward the evidence's against the actor for his crime which he is accused of but till date no authorities have started any judicial enquiry against the person. Society is still unaware whether the actor is prime suspect of scam or not.
I do not agree with both the claim and reason due to it's legitimate behaviour. If a person has done something wrong which is truly unacceptable by society, then it's societies right to disregard the person as hero. But if, the person is true and haven't committed any wrong act, then it's that person's right to go thorough the process of judicial to prove himself/herself as innocent and so the society will come to know who exactly was wrong either media or the person.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s like background or past history check cant be performed due to some limitations in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...as hero. But if, the person is true and havent committed any wrong act, then its that ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd havent committed any wrong act, then its that persons right to go thorough the p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74575831979 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518604651163 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7933846098 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.470588235 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151844673038 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050459947941 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342820975845 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818867526262 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374492610113 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s like background or past history check cant be performed due to some limitations in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...as hero. But if, the person is true and havent committed any wrong act, then its that ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd havent committed any wrong act, then its that persons right to go thorough the p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74575831979 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518604651163 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7933846098 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.470588235 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151844673038 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050459947941 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342820975845 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818867526262 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374492610113 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.