Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Spending much time and money to protect wild animals according to some people is better spent on the human population. This is because there are a lot of impacts of human population issue such as poor condition in many countries and environmental problem caused by human.
One of human population effects is huge cases of poverty in many nations such as in Asia and Africa. This phenomenon is caused by overload population in a country which is size of land inappropriate with the number of society. For example, increasing of population in Java, as a one of big island in Indonesia, is linear with inclining of poverty. Statistic Organization of Indonesia argues that the density of Java’s is not linear with land area. Therefore, some cities in the island were set as poverty city in 2020.
Moreover, the impacts of the issue is directly to environment. The demography in metropolitans try to reduce green area which can cause disaster like flood. Reducing the area also aggravate quality of air and destroy animal habitats. The phenomenon has happened in Banjarmasin, capital city of West Kalimantan, where there was no trees as wildlife habitat that were house for animals and also filtering smoke of factories surrounding the city. This one could lead to the citizens suffered respiratory diseases as asthma and inflammation of the lungs and endangering number of wild animals.
In conclusion, human population have to be a priority because it causes poverty and environmental problems. If it is possible, the authorities should take this issue to be consideration.
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Suggestion:
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... no trees as wildlife habitat that were house for animals and also filtering smoke of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12403100775 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97673409236 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5344739499 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264500334433 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081664864917 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954730829741 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165733259326 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107096309606 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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