Nowadays, along with the thriving development of modern technology, the smartphone is one of the most prevalent and also a must-have device for any individual. In this case, children are no exception. this tendency has raised the issue that they are spending too much time on surfing the internet or playing mobile games on their smartphones. In my opinion, the smartphone can definitely offer an enormous source of entertainment while children are more drawn to playing rather than learning, so children are likely to be addicted to smartphones easily. I believe this is a negative tendency explained in this essay.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the smartphone is a versatile and flexible implement that assists children in resolving problems as well as entertaining. It can help them find literally any information on a click of a button using the Google engine, especially the open AI platform can answer any type of question using voice recognition. When it comes to entertainment, with the Wi-Fi connection, children can access a host of entertainment provided by various manufacturers online. For instance, a student can search online for a specific mathematical solution with ease, this helps him to reduce the burden of spending hours thinking of ideas and ways to resolve math problems. Moreover, he can play video games to relieve stress after hours in classes. Hence, the smartphone isn’t just a device for dialing, it is an efficient tool for learning and entertaining as well.
On the other hand, despite the pros that the smartphone can offer, there are absolutely some drawbacks related to mental health problems and cyberbullying matter. Particularly, young students cannot distinguish the good and bad on the Internet area which is full of misleading and incorrect information nowadays. As a result, naive and mischievous students are likely to take up bad hobbies from a group of bad people that they idolize. For example, there are a lot of content creators who post short videos on various platforms talking about drugs or murder which creates bad experiences in children’s minds and turns them into cyberbullies. Not to mention that spending hours in front of a small screen attributes to many health problems such as depression and eyes related ailments.
in conclusion, although the smartphone is a powerful tool for students to learn and blow off steam after study, the drawbacks are inevitable and sometimes can affect children’s personalities and health in a negative way.
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 78
- Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in the countryside Why do you think this is Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give 78
- Many countries apply to be the host of an international sporting competition such as Olympics but only one is ever chosen What are the benefits for a country of hosting an international sports competition Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvant 61
- These days mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20147420147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99547598608 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574938574939 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1694016123 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.529411765 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223031293652 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754173899574 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738411658063 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130694475135 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890582775347 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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