The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
To what extent do you agree with this?
Due to a significant increase in health problems related to overweight, the healthcare system has been overwhelmed. Many people believe that enhancing exercise lessons and sports activities in schools is the best solution to address it. I partly agree with this idea, as there are still more effective approaches.
I agree that introducing more physical education lessons in curricula is necessary to tackle health issues. It has long-lasting effectiveness with an affordable investment for young generations in the early, compared with expenditures on curing diseases associated with obesity and overweight later. If students do more exercise and participate in sports in their schools, they can be fitter and healthier, enabling them to avoid a sedentary lifestyle. Furthermore, their family members encouraging their children are more likely to engage in physical activities. As a result, people might avoid becoming overweight, helping reduce the pressures on the healthcare system in the long run.
Nevertheless, introducing more physical education lessons in schools is not the best method. People can intentionally adopt different steps to not being overweight daily, which is more direct and appropriate for each individual than only focusing on physical education in schools. For example, improving people’s awareness of a balanced diet schedule will have better effects on the person’s weight and health problems. Another one is that public physical activities, such as morning exercises and dancing in the parks, may influence popularly on the community. Thus, individuals can flexibly adopt other appropriate methods depending on their health condition and lifestyle.
In conclusion, encouraging more physical education in the school curriculum is crucial to reduce pressures on the health care systems. However, I think that there are some better methods to deal with overweight problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74295774648 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.040547497 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0995673214 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.733333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383402800966 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122919303998 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743895147628 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239419118679 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381766501904 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.