some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give opinions
In society, there are two opinions about how early formal education should be implemented especially in primary school. Some of them think it is better for children to go to school before 7 years old and others said that they should at least reach the age of 7. This essay will discuss why it is ideal for children to go to school after the age of 7 and why some people might think otherwise.
7 years old is the ideal age to go to school because they will encounter new people and most of them are older. They should be adapted to different situations at home. For example, the new student is braver to talk and to face their new peers in the classroom or with seniors outside. Besides that, they will be ready to follow the lesson by the new teacher and they will not be scared. From the explanation above, I would say that new kids in primary school are ideal if they are 7 years old.
On the other side, there are some parents who feel enthusiastic about registering their children for elementary school, even though their age is under 7. They argue that the kids know how to read, write, and count because they learned it in preschool. besides that, the government policy has given the permit to start education at formal school for students under 7 years old, if they have a certificate from kindergarten. Therefore, their parents were very interested in sending their children to school although their ages were below 7.
In summary, education is an important thing to everyone, and choosing a good time to start it, is the best way to raise our ambition and prevent failure. The last, is to start formal school from how old are depend on the children, but for me 7 years old was the ideal age to go to school.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...t because they learned it in preschool. besides that, the government policy has given t...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...to start formal school from how old are depend on the children, but for me 7 years old...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48253968254 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35956532033 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7970964568 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333198323973 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1227300258 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860436996853 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211014616592 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109803279609 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...t because they learned it in preschool. besides that, the government policy has given t...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...to start formal school from how old are depend on the children, but for me 7 years old...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48253968254 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35956532033 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7970964568 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333198323973 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1227300258 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860436996853 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211014616592 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109803279609 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.