Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
Nowadays,most of the people put some standards to measure the intellgence and the optimal way for them is measurment tool called success while other people think that intelligence don't have a specific way to measure it.These essay has two different point of views discussing the two prespectives for the people weither you agree of disagree with them.
The way of people thinking that the intellgence can be measured by success is a good way of thinking. It can indicate weither the person you are talkng to or dealing with can handle a hard situation or no,Also,Thats the community standards these days to measure the intellgence by the success of the person,If the people saw you successful in your own life the first impression is that's an intellegent man he thinks in a much better way than the others,As an example,If you are lookng for a job in an international company the first thing they are looking for if these person can add for the company or no so,If you are a successful man not only in your carerr but in your life overall you are going to be hired further more the intellgence is related to success as another example your society is seeing you in a different way if you are smart or intellgent the first thing they are saying thats an intellgent man he is successful in his own life for sure.
On the other hand,Their are a group of people think that intelligence can be measured in other ways not only by success.Intellgence can be measured in so many different ways,One of them is the iq test that's a legit way of measuring the intelligence also their is more and more tests to measure it,And it can be used to determine the level of intellgence of the people,In my country their is a weird way of measuring the intellgence by your education degree its a weird way but thats how my country works if you have a degree of a doctor or a pharmacist that means you are an intellgent guy,Further more,Their is another way to measure the intellgence by knowing how much money the person gain if he is a rich guy that means he is an intellgent guy.
And last but not least we can conclude that their is so many ways to measure the intellgence and it also depend on your society,community and your country it can be measured by the tests,community standards and the success,In my opinion,The real measure for the intellgence or the most accurate way to measure it is by being a successful person to go for your passion something you love to do something your dreams are all about not only for gaining more money thats the success that leads to the intellgence in my prespective and finally dont forget to work smart not hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 475.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55789473684 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86972466756 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385263157895 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 95.0 20.2975951904 468% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 272.425696292 49.4020404114 551% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 433.0 106.682146367 406% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 95.0 20.7667163134 457% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423761255108 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.306901477206 0.084324248473 364% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796466171638 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30188822121 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582149577518 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.5 13.0946893788 363% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 50.2224549098 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 11.3001002004 336% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 40.0 10.1190380762 395% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.