Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people believe owning a pet or a dog is bad or dangerous, others believe it has a lot of benefits for kids. Having a pet in your family can add a lot of joy and happiness for your kids and move them away from anexity and loneliness. In this essay we will discuss different aspects about having a pet whether it’s good or bad for kids.
Having a pet isn’t that enjoyable as it looks like, it’s a responsibility that you should consider it . You should keep your pets clean and vaccinated against disease. Besides, providing them with the activities that they needed. The disadvantage of keeping pet is will always involve efforts and money for your pets to keep them alive and healthy.
On the other hand, on of the advantage of keeping pet for your kids is they will be happier every day. As we know take care of pets can reduce the suffer from loneliness .For example, we can see for those who keeping dogs as their pet. In addition, People who have pets are less likely to suffer from depression than non-pet owners.
Finally, having a pet has pros and cons that you should be aware of it before decide to be a pet owner. Owning a pet is something common in our society , which is most of us like to play with animals . Keeping a pet can add a lot of joy and happiness for you and your kids every day. Also, they can be a home security and they also can teach us about responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, look, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34351145038 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38193629334 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2011567662 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235058695554 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966375164886 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598913968536 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163056261369 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438208443032 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.