Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's world, with the advanced technology, it would be easier for people to get access to every platform and they can store their personal information there in order not to manually repeat next time when they pay a visit again. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to potential online crimes and exploitation data.
One serious problem that can arise from people sharing information is that it can lead to the increasing prevalance of identity theft. It can begin with a hacker stealing someone's private information to gain unauthorized access to their bank account and withdraw money or make online purchases. When the victims know, they will try to contact with their bank to stop the transactions, which takes quite a lot of time. Therefore, they sometimes end up with permanently losing all their assets. Despite the efforts made by banks and online security companies to combat these crimes, it remains an ongoing battle without a clear victor. Therefore, utilizing personal information in any online activity entails a significant risk.
Another threat is that once data is posted online, it is likely to be expolited. Some online organizations or companies can use individual's personal information unethically without their accepting for various purposes such as targeted advertising or selling to other parties. Take my brother as an example, one time when he was browsing Facebook, he saw an advertisement for English course having his image as a profile for that website by chance appearing on the newsfeed. He was so surprised and not really happy about it because how his photo could be there in public without his consent and his acknowledge about it. So if there are many websites out there having his information and he did not know about that, making him worried a lot. Therefore, when sharing information, people should be aware of its privacy in case some websites can use it for their purposes.
In conclusion, although it has become more popular for people to put their data on some social platforms, it has brought too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01412429379 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75506578876 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7353658064 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320945266165 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994519337539 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687553963446 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197596864036 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359501872796 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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