Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, advertising is a powerful tools used by businesses to promote their products. Some individuals argue that watching advertising too much causes viewers to lose interest, but others think it's a good way to encourage people to buy those things. I agree with the later and this essay will dicuss both views.
On the one hand, advertisements is irritating to people who are in middle of watching videos. Content creators and producers can make loads of money from the advertisements so they tend to put the ads in the middle of the video more often, sometimes the announcement is longer than the video in length. This is one of the most reason why people lose interests in watching the marketing clips. For example, most persons click skip ads while watching the video on facebook or youtube because they think it is disturbing them watching the videos.
On the other hand, company can use broadcast to create an influence on their customer in many ways. By investing budget in making video, poster or broadcast the producers can easily get their cilent attention on the goods. As for the gaming industry, before the game studios release a version of their products, they usually post trailers on social media to annouce about the gameplay, graphics so that they could awake their consumers interests. Another way to promote is using the celebrities influence. This might be the quickest way to marketing, the more popular the famous person is, the higher chance the product receive publicity.
In conclusion, i believe that advertisements can effectively persuade consumers to buy goods and services, but not all of them are welcoming. Therefore, the establishment must design the advertisements properly so that they have the highest effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: tool
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78442780378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0136566457 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168975905126 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575827711199 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511710168613 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110426719368 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541445320612 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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