In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available.
Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Fast-food industries are rapidly improving associated with the increase in demand for fast food, fast food is gradually inexpensive and available around the world. Although it can bring convenience and quickness by cutting down times spent making home-cooked food, I reckon that the adverse effects of fast food outweigh the positive ones because it can potentially be detrimental to humans’ health, which will be elaborated profoundly in this essay.
To begin with, fast food can cause pessimistic diseases such as cancer to people. It potentially contains various complicated substances such as carbohydrates and several substances that even be never known by us. It can be difficult to separate and transfer these substances into other conducive compounds, and the remaining residue can create cancer cells inside the human body. Indeed, in reality, most percentage of individuals struggle with cancer because of habits of eating fast food, much less their cancer due to hereditary cancer cells.
In addition, a high rate of obese people is also deriving from fast food. Several fast-food manufacturers are always not only add some additives but also flavor enhancers, fatty compounds, and much sugar to enhance the appetite of humans. The way fo consuming much sugar can cause excessive calories inside the human body, and if they are not taking up regular exercises, it can easily cause obesity, from that, it can also generate potential chronic illnesses such as high blood pressure or cardiovascular diseases. In recent years, many young generations in the US have been having obesity, diabetes, or heart disease because they consume much fast food and their immune system cannot digest all sugar from fast food, as a consequence, redundant sugar will transfer into fat and make them get out of shape.
In conclusion, there is no deniable that fast food is still becoming prevalent for people because of its affordable price. Besides its several positive aspects, namely, convenience and quickness, I still believe that the disadvantages of fast food can outweigh the advantages because it is the reason for dangerous diseases such as cancer, obesity, and heart disease.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32753623188 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76091483093 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8630019398 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.166666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160385071964 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698648986997 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519567652942 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111757804643 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516062152794 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32753623188 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76091483093 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8630019398 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.166666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160385071964 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698648986997 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519567652942 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111757804643 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516062152794 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.