Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In today’s world, a plethora of people tend to use alternative remedies willingly without their doctor’s suggestions. From my point of view, this phenomenon has both advantageous and disadvantageous results for individuals.
On the one hand, the most significant positive aspect derived from the above phenomenon is that the citizens can understand themselves clearly and find out the best suitable medicine for them proactively by identifying what are the beneficial and adverse impacts on their health when they access to the latest remedies. It can not only update their knowledge related to drugs to protect them from the potential disadvantageous effects of it but also minimize their expenditure partly unless they hire a high-priced private doctor. As a result, while burgeoning about the cost of hiring a private doctor, then absorbing these latest drugs can feel their health profoundly and assist them in saving money.
On the other hand, taking several medicines from their private doctor is usually better than utilizing alternative drugs based on their own diagnosed obstacles. Doctors indeed have more professional experiences and medical accomplished skills than patients, therefore, they can know what is the preeminent treatment after examining and conjecturing their patients’ problems through initial symptoms specifically. As a consequence, when trying substituted medicines without a doctor’s permission, can cause several potential complementary effects on an individual’s health which cannot be controllable.
In conclusion, while experiencing several new remedies contain hidden helpful outcomes for people in some cases, however, it can cause diseases adversely out of residents’ control
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86507936508 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15536831548 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7377968149 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.222222222 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197354477047 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830616733764 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410396199861 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109348277763 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591519322931 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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