The majority of vehicle nowadays are utilizing fossil fuel-based engines and they need to be restricted. Many people assume that electric vehicle is an alternative solution for this. In my opinion, i am completely convinced by the idea because global warning is getting worse and worse. Furthermore, it helps to protect residents’ health in many aspects of life.
On the one hand, It is undeniable that global warming is altering our lives negatively day by day. A primary reason behind this could be cars prices are gradually becoming affordable for the residents. Which means too many cars on the road will emit Carbon Dioxide into the atmosphere and enhance the green house effect, making the climate warmer and a host of issue following such as ice melting, rising in sea level, air pollution, etc…For example, many research have claimed that the global average temperature has been soaring persistently over a few decades. They stated that the amount of ice melted on the south and North poles is relevant to the amount of heat gained during the survey period.
On the other hand, Electric cars help to protect citizens’ health. Since electric cars do not actually emit any toxic gases into the air. They reduce a significant number of patients with respiratory ailmentS. additionally, electric cars generate less noises than normal vehicles so there will be no noise pollution which can definitely benefits people who are suffering from auditory disorders or noise related insomniA. For instance, since the adaptation of electric vehicles in Danang 3 months ago. Statistics has showed a significant decline of Lung cancer patients admited in the Oncology deparment. This address the benefit of electric vehicles on residents’ longevity.
In conclusion, I admit that altering the whole transportation system could be an arduous task. However, the benefits it offering us just overweight the drawbacks as it not only put a halt on global warming but also improve people’s living standard specifically their well being states.
- Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten Which do you think is better Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 84
- Some educationalists argue that non exam art based subjects such as music drama art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do you 89
- The Chart below shows the value of one country s export in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 73
- The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008 73
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports Why is it a positive or negative development 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27217125382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77483127026 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654434250765 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.93045462 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149852883521 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464620935163 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491877946914 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797664974439 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422588900668 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.