People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
There is a quote that says, 'Luck can be defeated, but not Hard work'. Yes this quote very well connects with the topic where hard work is always essential for person's success than Luck. Many inspirational stories and people are famous only because of hard-work but not of Luck.
To begin with, Hard work is closely knitted with many tiny things such as, continues learning, proper planning, dedication, time-management and mainly consistency. Success is always associated with these qualities but not merely a luck. For example, Edison's great invention of light came through several hard works, setbacks, failures and consistent effort throughout his discovery. He proudly said that, he had learned ten thousand different ways of doing it' after his final great invention after several failed attempts.
On the other hand, Luck only plays a small role in any journey towards success. We heard only a very few achievers with only luck as a soul factor. Luck will not help one in gaining learning, character building and experience as hard-work does with a person through his journey towards success. We are getting paid by our employer only for our work not for luck. Anything that comes without hard-work will not sustain for a long. Journey towards success through this will not build character and consistency than the former one.
To conclude, Hard-work is the main factor which contributes to success. Hence the consistent effort really plays a key role and a salt of person's success with a little or no luck in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03557312253 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55296806796 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.200401604 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9333333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281359673252 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115919587934 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752836439907 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197700709529 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742234896498 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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