Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
The says in every subject you should visit its specialist. In recent years this has become a problem among people who have health problem don’t visit doctor. According to some, they try to cure themselves by their medicine’s alternatives. I think this is a wrong work to do because in many causes if you don’t know about the drug and consume it causes death.
Therefore, people shouldn’t use different drug and medicines aids when they are illness without allowing their usual doctor. First, before using them should ask either a nurse or their relative doctor because in most cases specially for people who have danger health problem it causes to death and makes a disaster. Second, if does not lead to die it would have very irreparable effects that is with her/him for the rest of her/him life. Hence, the government should set rule for prevent this problem. Although people of a society should know about drugs and allow to use them when they have unsignificant sick such a cold which does not necessary go to visit a doctor they don’t have this right to use them in dangerous health problems and dangerous situations.
On the other hand, if people trying do other alternatives medicine’s the medical class is affected economically a lot. It is a negative aspect for the society that their doctors become unemployment. Although it is essential the knowledgeable people should be increase about medicine to know about different medical and alternative ways they have to allowed by their usual or special doctors to consume and the duration of treatment. Not only does this make keep the status of doctors in the society and people respect them but also, they can have their job as a good source of income. Thus, clients have to use the doctor's prescription.
In conclusion, I think it is very good to rise to knowledge of people and I strongly agree with it but if the government set useful rules for it that reduce the side effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...elves by their medicine’s alternatives. I think this is a wrong work to do becaus...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: THREE_NN[1]
Message: You used three nouns after one another, and this might decrease readability. You might consider rewording the sentence.
...ost cases specially for people who have danger health problem it causes to death and makes a disaster...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...e other hand, if people trying do other alternatives medicine’s the medical class is affecte...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e doctors prescription. In conclusion, I think it is very good to rise to knowle...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...good to rise to knowledge of people and I strongly agree with it but if the gover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les for it that reduce the side effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82985074627 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60446692039 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50447761194 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0427900921 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315565435534 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11312417707 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496681115892 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197534906761 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789613955127 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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