Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. Some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Innovation often come from the desire to make money and grow financially, however some people believe that it should focus more on solving social and environmental issues. This easy will discuss the importance of this both sides of the argument before sharing my opinion at the end.
On one side, people believes that innovation increase profits and can drive economic growth. Hence, it’s leads to efficiency, productivity and job creation. Moreover, new technologies can be one of best solution for profit increase economic, because you can invent new technologies to improve people’s life. further more, the government can sell this products to foreign countries. This will motivate and encourage companies to create new products and services leading to technological progress. For example, in Japan they invented a lot of innovation and they took important steps in the production of modern computer chips. In addition to the innovation of cars navigation and their code. Thus all these help the economy increase of any country.
On the other hand, innovation consider one of the most important solutions in solving the environmental and social problem and this will make them saving effort and time. if they learned how to save time, they will have the opportunity to be more productive and creative. For Example, the invention of the electric car offer a significant benefits for the environment. Which reduces the air pollution, by reducing the uses of fuel.
In conclusion, to achieve balanced innovation we should focus on both perspectives economic growth and addressing social and environmental problems.This will ensure progress and long term
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37164750958 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91426097241 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2116360998 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207968218013 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629231746498 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788487775137 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149534694052 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081217629403 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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