The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The line graph appears that the visits abroad by UK is greater than Visits to the UK. In the beginning the Percentage between them is closet each other, then they go away. From 1979 to 1984 the Visits abroad by UK residents was increased around ten millions. In the other side, visits to the UK by overseas residents increase a little. Between 1984 and 1989 Visits abroad was increased from less than fifth to around a third. And by 1989, around the fifth was Visiting the UK . After 1989 there is a noticeable growth about the visit s abroad by UK residents. Visits to the UK was increased but less than visits abroad. In 1999, the numbers of the visits abroad was double the numbers of visitors to the UK.
In the bar graph. It talked in 1999. The most Popular country visited by UK in this year was France. Just over 10 million of UK visitors Visited it . The less popular country in this graph was Turkey. Just less than 3 million visitors visit this country. In the second Place was Spain. Just under a ten millions of visitors Visited this place. The USA is greater than the Greece but both of them Just under a five millions of visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'ten million'
Suggestion: ten million
...ad by UK residents was increased around ten millions. In the other side, visits to the UK by...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...89, around the fifth was Visiting the UK . After 1989 there is a noticeable growth...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ver 10 million of UK visitors Visited it . The less popular country in this graph ...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'ten million'
Suggestion: ten million
...he second Place was Spain. Just under a ten millions of visitors Visited this place. The USA...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'five million'
Suggestion: five million
...he Greece but both of them Just under a five millions of visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, then, third, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44075829384 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20296378523 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445497630332 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5022982853 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.0555555556 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7222222222 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395979377259 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157481739401 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10181508005 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298889570413 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542064194418 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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