The amount of money that a children s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 2016

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The amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year,2016.

The pie charts illustrate the certain sum of money that a children’s charity in the USA spent and received over the course of the year in 2016.
The total amount of revenue resources is 53,561,580 dollars. Provided food has a significant proportion of 86.6 percent of sources of income. After that, the community contributes a small minority of 10.4 percent income streams. Then, the program revenue come with an insignificant amount of 2 percent of the funding sources. After these comes the investment income, government grants, and other incomes with a combined percentage of 0.8 percent.
The overall sum of the expenditures is 53,224,896 dollars. The most part is for program services which is 95.8 percent of the outlays. The other things in the expenses are insignificant as that the fundraising owns 2.6 percent, and the management and general owns 1.6 percent of the costs.
Overall, it can be seen that donated food has a large portion of revenue resources, while the program services accounted for the most expenditure

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s which is 95.8 percent of the outlays. The other things in the expenses are insign...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13609467456 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84476955843 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5411348974 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142658800761 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564047792351 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135759180504 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123790515625 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194017231955 0.0819641961636 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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