Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
All large companies should provide sports and community facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The question of whether large corporations should provide sports and community facilities to local communities is a controversial one. In my opinion, I agree that these companies should contribute to local infrastructure, as this benefits both the community and the corporations themselves.
Firstly, large companies should invest in local facilities for their own benefit. Many residents in the areas where these companies are located are their employees. If employees have access to high-quality community facilities, such as healthcare services, schools, recreation centers, and shopping malls, they are likely to experience a higher quality of life. This, in turn, enables them to focus more on their work, leading to higher productivity and greater profits for the company. Therefore, by supporting the local community, corporations can indirectly improve their own performance.
In addition, companies should consider the health of both their employees and local residents. By setting up sports centers or sponsoring sports clubs, companies can encourage people to be more active. In today’s world, many people work in sedentary jobs, often spending long hours sitting in front of computer screens. Busy schedules can make it difficult for them to find time for exercise. However, if there is a gym or sports center nearby, employees are more likely to engage in physical activity, improving their health. Healthier employees tend to have more energy and work more effectively, which benefits the company as well.
In conclusion, I believe that providing sports and community facilities should be part of large companies’ responsibilities. Not only does this improve the quality of life in the community, but it also contributes to a more productive workforce, benefiting the companies themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64835164835 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09841179382 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9868028342 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242980401084 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938962042732 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884246981696 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184243872241 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860912781641 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.