Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
vvvIn this contemporary life, there are many people who believe that students have to pay all their tuition because higher school education benefits society. Despite the long-term effects of education, it's also one of the important parts of our life. However, students, especially young people, have to have some societal skills such as communication or experiences facing problems.I balanced with these arguments but paying all costs would have stress on students and living conditions. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before the conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favour of whether students should pay all their education costs because of the benefits of university rather than university. First, education is believed to equalize job opportunities among young adolescents regardless of their family background. This financial support for their university education because of advantage presumably tends not only to increase the overall learning enrollment rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society .Example, students want to apply their job they need to have university qualifications or when they travelling knowledge can help them go to anywhere and explore many things. Second, students paying for all their education would probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that knowledgeable and skilled human capital are imperative to foster economic growth and technology development in any nation
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once students pay full tuition in university and it’s a sign that anyone, not only young people should have society skills and it’s also help students in their life. First, when people paid full tuition would likely correspond with a financial tremendous strain on a country. Paying all costs would have a pressure on poor students, generating no income from society, students could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare systems and transport infrastructure.Second, students pay all costs for education university because many people believed that it’s more benefits than society would tempt many young people including those who do not experience life or show no interest in working for society especially they become over passive at work and therefore adding great burdens for university staff and government and potentially wasting time that these young people could spend their time for trying many activities to support education for their future career paths. It, instead, would be a more financially viable option if the resources were focused on supporting less privileged yet gifted students.
In conclusion, anything these days should have education support. However, students also put attention on social skills. From my perspective, government should have subsidies for poor students such as a motivation and students find some social activities to support their career, seek help for problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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...y, which promotes an egalitarian society .Example, students want to apply their jo...
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...t their career, seek help for problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2737.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59713701431 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85041499677 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525562372188 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.9 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.858691183 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.466666667 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326143287692 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114764657806 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102737803638 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206858807648 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805090037587 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: VvvIn
vvvIn this contemporary life, there are many ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nication or experiences facing problems.I balanced with these arguments but payin...
^
Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y, which promotes an egalitarian society .Example, students want to apply their jo...
^^
Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t their career, seek help for problems.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2737.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59713701431 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85041499677 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525562372188 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.9 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.858691183 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.466666667 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326143287692 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114764657806 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102737803638 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206858807648 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805090037587 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.