Nowadays, health has become a major concern for everyone. New diseases are being diagnosed, which are major threat to human health. However, some people suggest that government should spend most of their health budget on heath education and preventative measures rather than treatment. I agree with this suggestion upto some extent.
It has been rightly said that prevention is better than cure. There are number of diseases like malaria,dengue,diabetes etc... Which can be prevented with some health measures. If people are aware enough to follow a healthy lifestyle than probably these diseases cannot even touch them. Moreover, there are some incureable diseases like HIV which need prevention not treatment. Thus, people can have a easy and safe life.
However, treatment play a indispensable role to cure a disease. Some natural occuring diseases like depression, cancer and heart problems require a treatment. Moreover, if a person has suffered from an road accident then definately he is in need of a treatment not any health education.
In conclusion, i can say that prevention is always better than treatment, though treatment cannont be declined. We should arrange awareness programs to aware people about various diseases and their prevention but treatment must be there for public welfare.
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...be prevented with some health measures. If people are aware enough to follow a hea...
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Suggestion: an
...on not treatment. Thus, people can have a easy and safe life. However, treatme...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283261802575 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.154506437768 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0729613733906 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0772532188841 0.0501214627716 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0300429184549 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103004291845 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0300429184549 0.0403226058552 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9467188089 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.0326793684256 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0772532188841 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300429184549 0.021408717616 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00858369098712 0.011925033212 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1307.0 1933.35771543 68% => OK
No of words: 203.0 316.048096192 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43842364532 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428571428571 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300492610837 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246305418719 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162561576355 0.137316102897 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9467188089 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.037074148 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 63.8332057741 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.5333333333 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.863161073 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 127.492653851 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 43.5825944171 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.59016393443 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33378435415 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0443202195416 0.102741220458 43% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.05233161086 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452527951046 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133700751536 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109941315815 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627169276955 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.210561968654 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.035449699851 0.0638462369009 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212122537282 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488203655733 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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