The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The rendered three pie charts compare the information about changes in annual utilization by a special UK school in three decades from 1981 to 2001.The data has been calibrated in percentage.
The overall trend depict that the main striking feature to be observed that the school spent more on teachers salaries over the given period.Initally, from 1981 to 2001,the figure of other worker salaries gradually declined from 28 to 15%.Next,the school of UK a little interested in insurance in all decades.What is more,the figure of teachers salaries followed an increasing trend ,rising from 40 to 50% in 1991 and 45% in 2001.
Turing to rest of description, the british school spent on resources and furniture equipment less than a quarter over the period.As for as comparesion is concerned,the digit of teachers salaries was one fold more than other workers in first decade.The total spending on insurance was 2% in 1981 whereas it inclined in 2001 to 8%.
To encapulate,teachers salaries constituted the largest cost to the school,and while spending increased dramatically for equipment and insurance .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'as for', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.12 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09 0.0759168565197 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.015 0.0366838410393 41% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.005 0.0131127313244 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.175 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.045 0.0379272487307 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19534462503 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045 0.0210936926555 213% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.095 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.005 0.00967000014798 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1108.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29545454545 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397727272727 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329545454545 0.247514529752 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.261363636364 0.171178102325 153% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153409090909 0.112407865282 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19534462503 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 58.343116773 49.3433353143 118% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0094962315 191% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 112.509999556 42.9750493124 262% => OK
Chars per sentence: 277.0 135.714022679 204% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 23.0094962315 191% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.689975730869 217% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.48048780488 946% => OK
Readability: 76.9545454545 47.7609492067 161% => OK
Elegance: 3.53571428571 2.94281807926 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461148771181 0.418131533498 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.331784953899 0.181151798455 183% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571769719185 0.0850326197045 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.00148302124e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.331019178239 0.228904883108 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765333279742 0.108899403657 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381067269776 0.367819155151 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0619716422251 0.0812612215331 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331019178239 0.316326947829 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765333279742 0.0921553760075 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.