in some countries, television ad radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior. in other countries, there or no censorship
here author is worring about objectionable things which are being telecast by television. so author is caliming that in some countries there is censorship while in other
thare is no or little censorship. here i am bent to having stern censorship in television.
in era of inreasing modernisation, movies are main center of attraction and always telivision will helpful to relive your stress after coming from days workload, but
increasing superfluous vulgarity, that is needless.the bad effect of this is manipulation of mind of child in wrong way. parents are always not likely to stay at
home to observe ativity of children.in each and every movie censor board should delimit certain boundary.
now days in increasing era of industrial competition, every product is advertising. but some times way of advertising product are not germane to product.advertising
is something to present about salient feature of product. but rather now days it seems to enthrall customer in any way. censorship can also help there to remove such
objectionable things.like in advertise of body perfume no need to show a sexy girl always wearing bikiny and obsessed with guy for intimacy.
many times censor ship can prevent biggest agitation by not allowing to telecast the news or topic that can hurt some prejudice of some community or religion strifes.
some times relation between nation are matter of subject related to this censorship.in such by being cautios in censoring, it is pesumable to restrict cataclysm.
there are certain example in which such things can provoke people to violence, which is gone viral by either social media or telivision channel and internrt sources.
censor ship can sometime obscure the truth. some events are there, specially related to news channel in which over all esposure is needed to supply very information
about any recent upheval. so in such case is not adorable.
for the sake of wide range benifit of censorship, which can concern somtimes concern to many lives, and international relation ship censor ship is benevolent, if
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27731092437 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106442577031 0.0880659088768 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0532212885154 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00840336134454 0.0444667217837 19% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.12324929972 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0532212885154 0.0406280797675 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91885964326 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0448179271709 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0588235294118 0.0997080785238 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224089635854 0.0249443105267 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196078431373 0.0148568991511 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2087.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 332.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28614457831 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397590361446 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289156626506 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19578313253 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138554216867 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91885964326 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 65.5827126363 55.4138127331 118% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.75 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.784671944 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4375 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.94800884956 283% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.6656626506 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.90588235294 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235521535959 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.096992522758 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.082441780748 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.73430227647 0.547984918172 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.2159414118 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982783116391 0.161403998019 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687005112699 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.129387543683 0.385218514788 34% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0733822902413 0.0692045440612 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106684659782 0.275328986314 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564565290832 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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