: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The way that we grow up has many important effects on our future. Children are really sensible and they learn many things in their childhood by seeing the way that they are treated. Some people believe that boys and girls should attend separate schools, others would disagree. In my opinion children should study in a same schools for the following reasons.
First and foremost, human always want to know about strange things. We all try to gain knowledge about different things, specially something that I see is different and the environment shows that it is something strange. Separating boys and girls in school cause that they always think about other gender and try to understand that why are not in the same school and what is the difference between them or what makes other sex special. For example, when I was in elementary school it was really wierd for me that my brother and I cannot study in the same school. I always suffered from being apart from my twins brother and I when I grow up I just spent a lot of time to search the net about it and I think it cause that I try to learn many things sooner than my age. As you can see, by making to genders apart, we just push them to think about opposite sex.
Another reason is that if both sex study in a same school they learn that both of them are equal and there is no difference between them. I always annoyed from seeing that boys are really better in my sociaty and I have always think that it is because they taught us this fact from our childhood. In my country boys and girls are in all places separate like schools, buses, hospitals etc. and after some generation men gain more power and so, now in the society they think that girls are not as important as the men. It is really harmful and in my opinion if we were in a same place from our childhood it would never happened.
It also has many bad effects on men and women who are aged. For example, two years ago I worked for a company as an engineer. It was really strange because our manager cannot talk to girls and it was the most important reason that cuase that company destroyed. Because most of the companies use girls as their manager and as our manager was week to contact with women, so, they did not like to contact our company. After about six month they closed the company. In my view, separating boys and girls cause that they become week in contacting and speaking to others.
In sum, I think we should learn the children that they are always same. Not only it cause that children try to think about some usefull thing in their childhood instead of thinking about their difference and try to find their answers, but also it cause that in the society the men and women have the same rights. In my opinion government should let boys and girls study in a same school to learn how to act to each other from their childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... search the net about it and I think it cause that I try to learn many things sooner ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... better in my sociaty and I have always think that it is because they taught us this ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey did not like to contact our company. After about six month they closed the company...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...to contact our company. After about six month they closed the company. In my view, se...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... that they are always same. Not only it cause that children try to think about some u...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... try to find their answers, but also it cause that in the society the men and women h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'apart from', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197552447552 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.164335664336 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664335664336 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0611888111888 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.118881118881 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.146853146853 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0174825174825 0.0351676179071 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.17855041368 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027972027972 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0034965034965 0.00188951952338 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.0646853146853 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157342657343 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013986013986 0.0139019557991 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2858.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 531.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38229755179 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.25988700565 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177024482109 0.251872472559 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103578154426 0.174417080927 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0621468926554 0.112833075102 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17855041368 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39736346516 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.7273397377 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.125 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7279927595 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 39.8274482109 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.05076142132 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246504343852 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125704068335 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816052891365 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497993664627 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135393825133 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100459725394 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667730380727 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360918648549 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0570445553555 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177621386427 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307836464623 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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