Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Separation of gender: Good or Bad?
You must know Martin Luther King Jr., the person who stopped the discrimination of white people against black people. Black-white branches happen because of discrimination against blacks, but single-sex schools happen because of discrimination against males or females? Cooperation and the similarity in subjects between males and females make single-sex schools unnecessary.
In recent and ancient years, men and women need to be cooperative to form a complete family or whole. Men in the historical times work as an official at an imperial court and do farm work. Women, on the other hand, were required to look after their residents; money, children, and hygiene are good samples of how women work. Until recent years, the tasks that men and women do are still very similar to ancient cultures. The sum of what the men and women do could make a family, and this family is school.
It isn’t necessary to have single-sex schools because the curriculum subjects are the same. According to most schools nowadays, the class routine includes mainly Chinese, English, and Math. These are the same for boys and girls. If there are single-sex schools, then there is just no necessity of building them because boys and girls could be put together, it is just a waste of government property.
Some people would argue that if single-sex schools are available, then it will prevent children from puppy love (children falling in love at a young age). But this is not logical; puppy love is a type of feeling, which occurs frequently, or permanently. If this can’t be dominated, then puppy love also can’t be prevented. So single-sex schools are useless too.
To conclude, cooperative attitude and similarity in curriculum subjects make single-sex schools unnecessary. Single-sex schools are negative for men and women, it could make them lose the opportunity to unite and interact. So, overthrowing the idea of single-sex schools is logical and will benefit a lot of men and women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ainst black people. Black-white branches happen because of discrimination against...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...curs frequently, or permanently. If this can’t be dominated, then puppy love also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13373860182 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78013335163 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6277981357 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.45 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860157642955 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316883162844 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200285654776 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493578427677 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167923067545 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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