Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Should boys and girls attend separate schools? This is an arguable question. As we all know, boys and girls have different hobbies and they are different in many ways. Education can be more efficient if they attend separate schools because the school cannot teach them differently based on their characteristics. However, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits. In my opinion, boys and girls should not attend separate schools.
First of all, boys and girls can play a complementary effect in learning when they are in the same school. Boys are rational thinking, while girls are perceptual thinking. Usually, boys are skilled in science and math, however girls are good at literature and art. When they study together, they can learn from each other. For example, when boys and girls work together on a group project, boys can teach girls what they are good at. Conversely, girls can also teach boys.
Furthermore, our society is made up of males and females. Working with the isomerism is one of the most important skills in the future. If you grew up in a single gender school, you may not know how to communicate and get along with the isomerism.
Boys and girls learn to live and work together from a young age, and as a result, their relationships with the isomerism are not emotionally underdeveloped. Boys do not grow up thinking of women as mysterious creatures, and girls do not grow up fearful of men. They can also learn from one another and experience different types of skill and talent that might not be visible in a single gender environment.
To sum up, it is unquestionably vital for boys and girls to attend schools together so that they can learn from each other, communicate with each other, and understand each other well, all of which is extremely beneficial to their future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and females. Working with the isomerism is one of the most important skills in t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88273615635 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71868159503 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511400651466 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6793039504 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8947368421 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238236019899 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919677078047 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991732500215 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13838324766 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583604693978 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and females. Working with the isomerism is one of the most important skills in t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88273615635 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71868159503 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511400651466 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6793039504 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8947368421 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238236019899 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919677078047 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991732500215 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13838324766 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583604693978 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.