People who are most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it
The statement claims that people who are the proponent of an idea or a policy are the most critical about it. Before one can agree or disagree with the statement one has to define what does "critical" mean. Does it mean people have to be analytical about it or questioning about it so as to develop it more before presenting it. One can partially disagree with the statement for many reasons which are discussed below.
since many generation, people from time to time have come up with many ideas and policies throughout the history, and one might have worked day and night to conceive an idea, let alone develop it. These people might be biased towards the idea or policy and would not be so critical. These people might not have asked questions to themselves over the various repercussion of the idea. Since they have worked very hard on the idea, they would not be as critical as their peers might be.
However sometimes people would have done extensive work on the matter and become experts in the idea or the policy that they want to propose and are confident that they can the solve the problems that might occur in future if the its implemented. These people would have worked out various model or process of the idea and are sure that it will yield desirable results. For example Prime minister of India has announced "make in India" campaign, with the main goal of making India the production hub of the world, for this he might have done several research, read studies and conducted surveys and finally came to a conclusion to implement it. This policy not only would make India a production hub, but also decrease the unemployment rate. All these probable outcomes may have made him confident of his idea.
Therefore one might claim that people who come up with an idea or policy might not be so critical about it unless they have studied the repercussions of its implementation and the consequences that would follow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ytical about it or questioning about it so as to develop it more before presenting it. O...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...y reasons which are discussed below. since many generation, people from time to ti...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun generation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many generations'.
Suggestion: many generations
...ons which are discussed below. since many generation, people from time to time have come up ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...as critical as their peers might be. However sometimes people would have done extens...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...propose and are confident that they can the solve the problems that might occur in future...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
... problems that might occur in future if the its implemented. These people would have wo...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Prime) must be used with a third-person verb: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: ministers
...ld desirable results. For example Prime minister of India has announced 'make in In...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some research'.
Suggestion: some research
... the world, for this he might have done several research, read studies and conducted surveys and...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...have made him confident of his idea. Therefore one might claim that people who come up...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193029490617 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.184986595174 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0563002680965 0.0880659088768 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536193029491 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.058981233244 0.0444667217837 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11528150134 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0455764075067 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58465665965 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241286863271 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00804289544236 0.0016655270985 483% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938337801609 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0509383378016 0.0249443105267 204% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0160857908847 0.0148568991511 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1955.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 339.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76696165192 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283185840708 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200589970501 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150442477876 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109144542773 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58465665965 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 49.5998272737 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2142857143 23.380412469 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8321616458 59.4972553346 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.642857143 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 23.380412469 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.674092028746 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 44.2732827644 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.18918918919 1.64882698954 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406381033019 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136549216529 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785054685234 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569246125348 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164594403828 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17722929683 0.161403998019 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133258928964 0.0892212321368 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369726972967 0.385218514788 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0567849546396 0.0692045440612 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280389987118 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861783324264 0.0653680567796 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.