Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
It has long been a hot controversy among contemporary researchers which of the two options of the past and modern life which one is more relaxing. As far as I am concerned, answering to this question is imperative, as it deals with the true reasons of happiness and comfort in human life. I would agree that life is easier now than before, as the modern people live safer, have more fun and have few concerns regarding the sustains of life than before.
First of all, the advancing in novel technologies such as telecommunication devices promises a more relaxing life. A prime example from my own experiences may shed some light on this point, I remember, when I was in primary school, I had to go to a coffee net in order to check my emails, while I can check the emails from my phone every time and everywhere now. Checking the news could be even more problematic if we go back to 400 years ago, where people had to rely on usually fake anecdotal news in streets.
Another pivotal reason for this phenomenon is transportation, today people travel more convenient and safer than before. The advancements in transportation especially airways play a major role in this scenario. For example, in four or five decades ago when airplanes had been serving only as a weapon for mankind, people had to travel by giant ships to travel between continents which were very hard as the travels took a lot of time like two or three weeks and even with some fatalities such as the Titanic catastrophe.
The last, but not the least, the increasing of knowledge in the whole host of fields can serve as a catalyst for keeping the peace. The knowledge helps the politicians to think wiser than before as they know the true power of advertisements is more effective than destructive wars. For instance, according to a research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, there is a direct relation between the enrollment in universities and decreasing wars in each region of the world.
To conclude, considering the above reasons, notwithstanding with all snags of new technologies, we can simply realize that they are very helpful, as they help us to have a more comfortable life compared to our ancestors. However, the new technologies like Internet has broadened, sharpened and deepened our knowledge, perception and experience, they should use wisely to serve us properly.
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- The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles) is less important now that it was in the past. 76
- tpo29 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83454987835 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92950303463 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579075425791 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1509295905 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.928571429 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216958360379 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653765437762 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05328893968 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103994781094 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503670400732 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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