The chart shows the source of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008

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The chart shows the source of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008

The given pie chart illustrates electricity produced from three sources such as fossil fuel, hydro power and nuclear power in four different regions ( India,Morocco,Vietnam and Sweden) of the world over five years.

Overall, fossil fuel and hydro power was the main source of energy in Morocco and Vietnam. Whereas, India and Sweden using all three too. However India was the only country depends on fossil fuels for electricity in peak range with 82%. Similarly, hydro power was the most significant source of current in Morocco about 95% in over the period given

The amount of electricity produced from hydro power was approximately, 52 % and 44% in Sweden and Vietnam respectively. While in India it was only 14%. Similarly, fossil fuels was used for current production in Vietnam around 56%. Whilst, such source was used in Morocco and Sweden comprised of 5% or below in given period.

With regards to the nuclear power, Sweden accounts for highest position with 44%. However, the other country (India) which was depends on this source was mere 4% in between 2003 and 2008.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66043819706 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6686524508 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181752884779 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721136297286 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820939326783 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126485459259 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465266860197 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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