Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss and give your opinion.
Recently, people argue whether advantages of zoos are no longer or not. In my opinion, I think zoos shoud be abolished because it causes various negatives for animal.
On the one hand, zoos are still a good way of entertainment for some people because of its education, especially for children. Firstly, they can raise their awareness of vital roles of animals as well as environment throughout extra-curricular activities in zoos. By seeing campaignes for environmental protection, people might perceive the environment as a friend, who need looking after carefully for the long-lasting and sustainable development, rather than a tool for people to exploit severely. Besides, zoos are interactive and attractive places to gain the knowledge about animals. For example, when children feed horses, they can observe eating process of horses and discover what kind of edible glass for horses.
Although these opinions are justifiable, the opponents still believe that zoos are not essential because they present the bad ways we treat to animals. Slaughtering animals is the first reason to argue. Most animals originated in natural habitats with diversity of characteristics. Animals live in the zoos for a long time may lose their original traits, which makes them unvaluable for human’s knowledge. Diseases of animals can be considered another impacts. Animals can get some psychological disorders when seperated from natural environment; they also feel sad, lonley as people. Also, refining animals together could spread some diseases among them once an individual is infected.
In conclusion, some people may consider zoos an useful recreational activity; however, I am convinced that we can entertain and learn by many ways, except for those that are harmful to animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, except for, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50545454545 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01039521306 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661818181818 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5793737666 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184175286659 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638949053757 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648049651051 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139413518317 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546730602012 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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