Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree?
It is undeniably true that the major purpose of schools is to educate pupil; however, many people argue that entertainment is quite essential in the school premises for the holistic development of students. I also advocate that extra-curricular activities play a crucial role in the physical and mental growth of a child.
To begin with, physical participation in non-educational activities such as sport, drama, art enhance the cognitive skills of the children. This is because such recreation offer opportunities to the learners to interact with their peers, which helps them to comprehend their strength and weakness. For example, a recent study by the World Health Organisation found that teenagers who often participate in sports or other activities excel in their academics and social life as compared to those who are physically inactive in recreational habits. Consequently, schools ought to be more entertaining in order to develop intellectual skills among pupil.
Furthermore, much emphasis on academics could lead to certain health associated problems. Unfortunately, today's parents and education structure place the huge burden in toddler's mind. In order to achieve high percentage, students usually engage in the persistent study which can isolate them from society. Owing to this separation, children may avoid the other facets of life, leading to the disinterest in study and frustration. This can further cause depression and other physiological disorder. Hence, to break the mundane of regular study, the school should have adequate resources for recreation.
In conclusion, it is evident that non-educational activities provide a platform to explore to the learners to be better off in their life. In my opinion, besides academics, schools and parents should priorities the extra-curricular activities because it could help children to prevent themselves from health and social illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18997082582 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9381510546 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134086831611 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423060645555 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361925226719 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770492996119 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163880787016 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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