Retirement age of people who live long
It’s argued that employee’s retirement age need to be increased significantly. This essay disagrees this statement because they limit a workplace for youth to work and it's not good to change country policy which is based on the life expectancy.
Increasing limit age of retirement affects the number of available jobs. As a result, amount of unemployment among the young people will be raised. However old people have experiences which have been accumulated for a long time, knowledge, a manner in their field, young people have much more energy, productiveness, execute task so quickly and efficiently. Particularly, the productivity of organization might be influenced by those older employees.
Another key point is, every nation has their own retirement system based on the life expectancy. In most of the countries, the age of retirement from 55 to 65. If we raise it in a specific nation from 65 to 70, where life expectancy is 75, there will be only 5 years to make a free time for the rest of the life. So it's kind of unfair for the society.
In conclusion, this essay disagrees the increment in retirement age of people from the work, because of influence in the job market and social life of old-aged people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01266512168 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4063378412 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229535691964 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879913577052 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796638180016 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1445427322 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634981886 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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